The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/06
A different approach to this same story might be to take us through a day of her purpose-less life, so that we better understand the "hole" in her spirit. You want your readers to feel the conflict, but the reading and tea-making were just peaceful instead. Very good writing, with some nice details. I liked the title of the unfinished book.
02/22/06
This was a great piece I liked it alot, keep up the good work.