The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
Nice parallel structure in this little devotional. Leave out the "oops!" and replace "tore up" with "torn up", and I'd say you could use this as an opening devotional for a prayer meeting. Good job!
02/22/06
Needs a little tweaking here and there but it has a truth in it.