The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
Very clever, with a good balance of dialog and description, written well.
02/21/06
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. This makes not only a great article, but could be converted into a spectacular sketch as well. A powerful way to present the gospel.
02/23/06
Ooooh,how nice! I liked this story. I like how the dead end was so made up and beautiful with no substance and the living end was a barracks. Looks can be deceiving.
02/24/06
Very clever, well done. The Living End - the message of choosing life now is evident. Nice.
This is a captivating piece. My mind was caught up in the mystery of where you were leading right to the end. Well put together.