The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
This piece has a very dreamlike quality. You can improve its readability with more attention to paragraphing, and I think it would be important to put a comma in "Here I am, God"--otherwise it has a very different meaning. The sentence "Now that you have reached the end of yourself, the real journey begins" is wonderful.
02/22/06
Curious as to why you did not punctuate or put in paragrahs? Or was it just thoughts?