The Official Writing Challenge
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This piece has a very dreamlike quality. You can improve its readability with more attention to paragraphing, and I think it would be important to put a comma in "Here I am, God"--otherwise it has a very different meaning. The sentence "Now that you have reached the end of yourself, the real journey begins" is wonderful.
Curious as to why you did not punctuate or put in paragrahs? Or was it just thoughts?