The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
Chris was very wise. Good story but very familiar territory; consider adding some kind of twist to take away the element of predictability. I like the little touches of wry humor.
02/22/06
Very well written story, but I tend to agree with Jan; it's one of those stories that has happened to everybody...needs a different twist, something unique, a surprise ending. Nicely done, however!
02/22/06
I disagree with the other reviewers, for some the story never gets told enough because when we're the ones in that kind of relationship it's good to see it put down on paper by someone. Good job.