The Official Writing Challenge
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02/20/06
This reads more like prose than poetry; consider arranging it in 2 or 3 paragraphs instead of one sentence per line. I've definitely experienced God's hand through dreams, too. Thanks for this encouraging word.
02/25/06
I saw the word "control" a couple of times - and thought perhaps I was critiquing the wrong topic; however, this piece makes alot of sense. Maybe it isn't on the subject of "Help", but when we let God control our lives...we do get help! An inspirational read - well done.