The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
Vivid description of a sadistic soldier humbled by our Savior. Very unique and creative.
02/13/06
Wow, this is powerful! I didn't like it, at the beginning until I realized where the story was heading. Dynamite!
02/14/06
Well written... a truly unforgivable character... finding forgiveness.
02/15/06
A clever idea for a story. It jarred a bit when your soldier used modern expressions, though; it's best to avoid idioms when re-telling Biblical stories. The ending is marvelous, and very satisfying!