The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
Speaking of breaks - your piece would be much more "reader friendly" with breaks between paragraphing; but you make a point...Take a Break...but keep on writing.
02/15/06
Consider an edit that eliminates or re-phrases some of the questions for the reader. As great sentence: Because we are always on the go, we miss the things that God would have for us. So true!