The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/06
"Nekorb"? Very clever. Great description and use of the fantasy genre to describe a wonderful truth. Nicely done.
02/20/06
Fascinating fantasy. I can see this story fitting in well in a children's Bible story book, with illustrations to match. Well done in the way you showed good triumphing over evil.