The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/06
There were quite a few errors such as "He paced", and didn't take his eyes "Off", etc, etc,; but when it came to the message...it was Right On! Jesus rested on the 7th Day when He was on earth...rested over the 7th day in the Tomb; and yet the world now rests on the First Day of the week, because??, well, a Pope made it official! So, your message is correct! God rested from His work as Creator! Very Enlightening...and well done!
Your message is clear. Remember the Sabbath to keep it holy. Well written and easy to follow.