The Official Writing Challenge
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02/18/06
There were quite a few errors such as "He paced", and didn't take his eyes "Off", etc, etc,; but when it came to the message...it was Right On! Jesus rested on the 7th Day when He was on earth...rested over the 7th day in the Tomb; and yet the world now rests on the First Day of the week, because??, well, a Pope made it official! So, your message is correct! God rested from His work as Creator! Very Enlightening...and well done!
02/20/06
Your message is clear. Remember the Sabbath to keep it holy. Well written and easy to follow.