The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
Very sweet story! Watch for spelling errors, which distracted a little bit. You painted a beautiful word picture of the outside evening. Nicely done.
This was a delightful story. I remember the same kinds of feelings as I raised my son many years ago. You are so wise to set aside whatever you are doing and to seize those moments when your child seeks you out. Bless you. This story touched my heart.