The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/06
I fell for this one hook, line, and sinker! Well-written--once I knew the ending, I went back and read it again, and you played fair all the way through--a masterpiece of writing!
02/14/06
Ditto here — I was convinced that some nasty pervert had kidnapped a child. Excellent job.
02/14/06
Brilliant! Masterful! Absorbing! I loved it and you fooled me also! In the beginning I had an inkling it might be an animal - but then I wavered when the parents got so involved. Great Job!
02/14/06
Wonderful!!!