The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
This might have been one of the last entries in the intermediate level but it is number one to me. Very descriptive, with the adjectives you used I could see everything in my mind's eye. The comparison with our life's obstacles was right on the money also. This is a winner!
Very well written and a lovely read. God bless.
02/13/06
Wonderful analogy...descriptive, thoughtful and well-written. Congratulations!
Awesome, Betsy! I agree....the images are very effective and your message rings true. Good job!! I love this one! :-)
02/13/06
This is a beautiful! Thanks for sharing your insight and your talent.