The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
Nice job of getting into Jochebed's head and heart. Well done.
Well done!
02/10/06
Heartbreakingly good.
02/11/06
Nice retelling. I felt Jochebed's maternal pain. This is a perfect example of giving God the control; something difficult for many. Great job!
02/11/06
Very well done getting into Jochebed's feelings. I loved this line: "She felt her heart breaking as easily as a clay jar, the fragments unable to be pieced together again." Well written!
Very well done.
Lovely story telling. Vivid and emotional. Moses is one of my favorites. Thanks for making it three dimensional.