The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/06
Very nicely done.
02/10/06
This whole story is very good, and your 3rd paragraph particularly chilling. Excellent.
02/11/06
I loved this - great job.
02/13/06
You've done a great job of making a familiar Bible passage more realistic. Congratulations!