The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, so many turns and dives!
The dialogue was so natural and sadly true. The ending was fantastic. Loved it.
02/10/06
Perfect!
02/11/06
Very nicely done. It struck a chord as we often don't know the actions and thoughts of others around us; only God does. I enjoyed this one. :)
Nicely done, I liked the different perspectives
02/11/06
You caught my attention right off the bat and kept it all the way through. So true to life and well written. Great job.
Excellent. A good lesson for us all. Reminds me of a story about splinters and planks... Wouldn't it be wonderful if we asked the Lord to help us see others and ourselves as He does. Thanks for writing this.
I loved this! I could see every bit of this! You truly have a way with story telling, my dear!