The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/06
I wonder if this might be more engaging if the last part were written as paragraphs, rather than as lists. You've got some very good material here--perhaps the outline of a book?
02/11/06
Yes, really great stuff in there! But it does read more like an outline than an article. This could easily be expanded into some vital reading!