The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
I really enjoyed reading this. It was one of those stories that you dont want to end. It kept my interest.
02/06/06
Since flying is one of my favorite things to do, the title caught my attention, and I enjoyed reading your story. I like your analogy to our life trip to heaven, but suggest a different name for the destination...maybe like Forever-Ever land!
02/07/06
What a delightful flight into the "hereafter". It's a good thing His hands are always steady. We humans need a lot of support and mercy!

02/09/06
Wonderful allegory!