The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
Fighting in front of the kids doesn't solve anything, as we know. You had a good ending to this and words of wisdom with God involved. Nice job.
02/08/06
A major problem in families today. And you addressed it beautifully and sensitively.
The thing I loved best is how you guided the reader to repentance. Great job!
02/09/06
Well-written, and I love the way you write dialog: lots of beats, very few affirmations. Bravo!
Well written and very applicable. Your sensitivity to details of emotion shines through. Good job on a piece that truly convicts the heart.
02/12/06
Feminists won't like this story...but I loved it! Very well written and made a very good point. Kudos!
*biting tongue* Oh how I know this feeling - only I'M the one who is using hard discipline. Well written, Garnet!