The Official Writing Challenge
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Very creative...I enjoyed the imagery.
02/09/06
The writing and imagery are top-notch. It's a bit problematic if it's read as an end-times scenario, because it doesn't match Biblical interpretation. If it's meant as an allegory, perhaps it should take place on an imaginary planet? You did a great job with this character, I could see the earth through those gray eyes.