The Official Writing Challenge
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02/09/06
Some familiar character types here--if you re-visit this, consider adding a twist of some sort. The mother is quite wise and charming.
02/14/06
A well written story that brought a smile to my face, Chelsea. If you ever expanded this - and it has heaps of potential - you might like to take us on Chelsea's emotional journey as she thinks over her mother's advice, prepares the meal, sees George come home looking like thunder, upping her internal drama until he reveals the flowers. Just a thought. Yeggy