The Official Writing Challenge
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02/07/06
Very clever way of getting to your point. Good work.
02/09/06
Love the transition to the grown-up Adam. In the first half, there are a few POV shifts that you might consider editing. As one who works with ODD and difficult students, it's refreshing to read about one who turns out all right!