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Christian Sci-Fi. Awesome! Very, imaginative and descriptive. Loved it, keep writing PLEASE.
Very good. Not at all how I imagined it would end. The more we try to move away from God, the closer we come to finding out who He really is. :)
Very clever idea, entertainingly written.

In an early paragraph, be careful of "...If one actually could control their emotions..." And watch out for tuff / tough.

Your borrowing of the Old West terminology for the future is really fun.
Although I've never been a Sci Fi fan, this Christian Sci Fi has me hooked! Fascinating...keep it going.