The Official Writing Challenge
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02/06/06
I think you did a good job on this. I have a feeling that you are not just writing a story but telling it like it is. If so God can help you just like you said all you need to do is ask.
Good luck
Humorwriter
I agree - this is good because it is honest. Raw honesty can be hard to 'control' in words, but this was precise, disciplined yet remained immensley warm. Admiting that they are not, indeed should not, be in control is the hardest thing that any man or woman can do. I will keep you in my prayers. God bless.
02/09/06
Well-written and real. Good job.