The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
A very beautiful and touching story. Well written.
Alice
01/30/06
Charming story and fairly well composed. The shifting voice bothered me a bit, took a second read to figure it out.
01/31/06
A lovely story. I was interested throughout, which means you kept me until the end. Nicely written, and thank you for sharing.