The Official Writing Challenge
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Without paragraphs to break up the story, it is awkward reading. To make it "reader friendly" would be a good start, and then the reader can consume it much better.
I was so drawn by your title.
My favorite words have always been, "Once Upon A Time..."
I'm so glad you found Jesus.
Your passion was felt in this piece. Thank you for sharing.
God bless you...Kate~