The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/06
Very nicely done.
02/02/06
Good job! (the number 12 should be spelled out, but that's minor :) Overall, an well written retelling of a wonderful account (I enjoy writing/reading those myself :)
02/02/06
Very, very good!
You set the sceane very effectively, and I liked how you captured the womans frustration and weariness, then her growing excitement at the coming of Jesus. God bless.
I enjoyed this! Well done!
02/05/06
Nicely written! I wrote about the woman with the issue of blook for the "rain" challenge. Her story has always fascinated me. You portrayed her well - I was immediately drawn in to her world. Great job!
Blessings, Lynda