The Official Writing Challenge
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I can't believe no on has commented on this article yet. I loved it! It was very well written. I could visualize everything taking place and it hit close to my heart. I find myself wanting to be like Dawn, and in turn, forget about what hospitality really means. Your point is clearly stated and incredibly honest and correct. Great job, hope to see more of your writing.
02/16/05
Your points are well made. We should all aim to be like Carmen, but we know a few Dawns and I don't know them to be happy. Love your story.
02/20/05
You did a great job comparing the two women and their different definitions of "hospitality." I'm sure all of us can relate to both.
One small thing - in the first paragraph, I got distracted by too many "me's." Maybe you could reword somehow. Other than that, Carmen did pass the test and so did you - well done! Thanks for sharing.
Blessings, Lynda
02/20/05
Well formulated, good comparison. Thought-provoking. Good job.