The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow. Abstract like a Dhali picture, engaging in a way I could not put my finger on. This made me work, I had to concentrate to follow the emotional fragments as the chain of thought weaves in and out. But I was richly rewarded. This is original, different, there is a strong voice here. But - sorry - I felt like it pulled it up short, finished too soon. Please would you consider looking at this again because I'm sure there is slightly more to this. God bless.
Looking at it again, I see the blank spaces, and a need to attempt filling at least some of them. Thanks.