The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh wow. Abstract like a Dhali picture, engaging in a way I could not put my finger on. This made me work, I had to concentrate to follow the emotional fragments as the chain of thought weaves in and out. But I was richly rewarded. This is original, different, there is a strong voice here. But - sorry - I felt like it pulled it up short, finished too soon. Please would you consider looking at this again because I'm sure there is slightly more to this. God bless.
03/20/08
Looking at it again, I see the blank spaces, and a need to attempt filling at least some of them. Thanks.