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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Space (01/23/06)

TITLE: Spaces of the Heart
By Cassie Memmer


Without my knowing, the space got smaller... yet life went on. I got my husband and
daughter off to work each day. I did the regular shopping, cooking, laundry, holiday

The space got smaller still. The unknown left me without a care as I attended church
services, meetings, and chorus rehearsals.

The space secretly narrowed. But there was work to do at the post office, sorting cards
and letters, selling stamps, weighing packages, dispatching mail.

And the hidden space became dangerously tiny. Nevertheless, it was a busy time of
chorus performaces, singing for holiday parties, nursing homes, and wrapping
mountains of Christmas presents.

Then the space closed.

The pain started and didnít stop. For three days I continued my lifeís routine before I
surrendered and drove myself thirty miles to see a doctor, hardly able to get there,
needing to pull over when the pain became unbearable.

After lying in the hospital with severe pain for twenty-four hours, the doctor entered my
room and gave me the diagnosis that had been missed the day before by the
emergency room doctors. I was having a heart attack! A heart attack? I thought, ďItís
three weeks past my forty-sixth birthday. How is this possible?Ē Aloud I asked, ďDoes
this mean Iím not going home today?Ē I laughed. (Might as well.) The doctor didnít.

The cardiologist came in and announced, ďYou need an emergency heart cath. You
could have another heart attack, a stroke, or die, but you need to have it. Take a few
minutes to decide and let me know.Ē

I was rushed from my private room to the Cardiac Intensive Care Unit. IV nitro was
started. My husband, Ed, stood beside me, nervous, with eyes stunned and wet. Our
daughter held on to my hand, crying without reservation.

ďKatie, donít worry,Ē I told her. ďIf something happens, itíll be all right. I donít want to
leave you and your dad now, but if that happens, Iíll go be with the Lord. And I will see
you later. However, I donít believe God is done with me yet, and I believe Iíll be fine.Ē

The decision made, I was rushed to the cardiac catherization lab and they found the
clogged artery. Very little life-giving blood was flowing through the occluded vessel. An
immediate angioplasty was done, but to guarantee the space would stay open they
inserted a stent. Once in place, the blood flowed freely through the wide opened artery,
and the pain ended at last.

An open vessel allows blood to flow throughout the body bringing life to all its parts. Itís
amazing how closing off that tiny space can bring life to a halt.

Many factors contribute to clogging the space inside those arteries. Eating wrong,
smoking, stress, family history, and certain diseases such as diabetes.

But thereís another space within our hearts that does need to be filled. Thatís the hole,
the void, that God put there. Our Creator purposely left that space in us knowing that
He is the only one that can fill it. And unless it is filled with His Holy Spirit, a person will
search endlessly for things to fill the vacuum. Some conditions needed to maintain its
fullness are bible study, prayer, humility, obedience, and faith.

Spaces. Some need to remain open and others need to be filled. Thankfully, the
implanted stent has guarded the space in my heart artery and helped it to remain open
for eight years. Iím even more thankful the void in my heart, that God space, is not an
empty chasm seeking for something to dwell in it, but is filled completely with His Holy

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Joe Moreland01/30/06
I can only say that I started to skim this piece, as I have done several others, looking at different styles - but I ended up reading it in it's entirety. When you can make me stop and read, when I didn't intend to, then you have got a compelling piece of writing on your hands.

Thanks for writing it.

Cheryl Harrison02/01/06
Very touching. Thank you for sharing.
Pat Guy 02/02/06
This is very well done! Good writing and a good read! Great messages of opposites. One to fill, the other to open. Great stuff!
Shari Armstrong 02/02/06
What a good lesson on how important our physical and spiritual health are. Well done.
Jan Ackerson 02/03/06
Very, very good. A very apt analogy, deftly drawn.
Linda Watson Owen02/03/06
An engaging telling of a very gripping experience! You've driven your point home well in this wonderful story! If this is autobiographical (I think it is), I'm so glad this health crisis had a happy ending.
Alexandra Wilkin02/04/06
This deeply personal piece was handled with a clear and detached eye; balanced, gentle and loving, rooted firmly in a strong faith. There is a rhythmic qaulity to this, particularly in the first 2 or 3 paragraphs. Very good. God bless.
T. F. Chezum02/04/06
Well written and descriptive. Good job.
terri tiffany02/05/06
Excellent. Very gripping story and you summed the ending up with balance. Loved it.:)
christine njihia02/06/06
glad u survived the whole ordeal and ed still has a wife and katie still has her mother.praise God!
Brandi Roberts02/12/06
Wow Cassie! An incredible comparison of our physical heart and our spiritual heart! Well done!
Joanne Malley05/24/06
This is a God-inspired analogy/comparison using the heart - no less, which is where the Holy Spirit resides. I'm sorry to hear of your experience if this is true, however, isn't it amazing when God uses us to open our eyes and see a myriad of things? I enjoyed reading this and its message therein! Blessings, Jo :)