The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely beautiful! The unique rhyme scheme is a perfect match for the meaning in this especially lovely poem. I'm going back to absorb it again. What a joy to read!
01/30/06
Wow! Where do I begin! I love the unique rhythm - it fits perfectly and takes us on a journey of hills and valleys. And like most readers who wiil read this, I too can say, 'I have been there.' You speak for so many - so well. And you will bless many - so much. Tender and inspiring.
01/31/06
A lovely poem and reminds me of myself...once upon a time. Thank you for sharing.