The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely picture of family space. Not just the home, but the heart.
02/01/06
Absolutely delightful. Break up the paragraphs (spacing) for readability, also lose the "you" second person references.
02/05/06
Nice story!:) your voice come through well. Dropping the you would make this article work very well!