The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
A very emotional read for me - as I said those very same words to my Dad, but it was too late...he was in a casket. Thank you for this beautiful story; and so well written. My tears flowed freely throughout!
This is a beautiful story, one to which so many of us can relate....Well done.
01/30/06
Wonderful, emotional writing.
It reminded me of my dad too.Thanks for sharing
01/31/06
Boo hoo! My own dad is now in that hospital bed and I can't get to him. A good message to others to not wait to share your heart. Well written.
02/01/06
Great story, well written. Even though I don't have a situation like this, we all need a reminder not to wait to say "I love you" to those we love. Definitely a tearjerker.
02/02/06
I don't think it will be long before you find you will have to move up to the Advanced level - this is certainly a well written piece that makes one pause and think.
02/02/06
A well written, touching story. Well done.
02/02/06
Practically perfect.
This story had me from the beginning. Very loving and so very true. I felt it was well written and flowed easily.
Congragulations on winning 1st place. Your article is very well done with a powerful message.
02/12/06
This was beautiful. I read your profile and love your enthusiasm for writing and your ambitious goals. I do think you'll acheive them!