The Official Writing Challenge
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A very emotional read for me - as I said those very same words to my Dad, but it was too late...he was in a casket. Thank you for this beautiful story; and so well written. My tears flowed freely throughout!
This is a beautiful story, one to which so many of us can relate....Well done.
Wonderful, emotional writing.
It reminded me of my dad too.Thanks for sharing
Boo hoo! My own dad is now in that hospital bed and I can't get to him. A good message to others to not wait to share your heart. Well written.
Great story, well written. Even though I don't have a situation like this, we all need a reminder not to wait to say "I love you" to those we love. Definitely a tearjerker.
I don't think it will be long before you find you will have to move up to the Advanced level - this is certainly a well written piece that makes one pause and think.
A well written, touching story. Well done.
Practically perfect.
This story had me from the beginning. Very loving and so very true. I felt it was well written and flowed easily.
Congragulations on winning 1st place. Your article is very well done with a powerful message.
This was beautiful. I read your profile and love your enthusiasm for writing and your ambitious goals. I do think you'll acheive them!