The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/05
This piece is beautifully crafted to demonstrate the love and humour and empathy of our Lord. You have brought Mary and Martha (and Lazarus, Jesus and Andrew) into a situation easily understood by us "moderns" without sacrificing the cultural and historical perspective. For me, this looks like a piece of "advanced" writing. Good work!
02/16/05
There was the humour and the human touch in this story that brought it closer to us in time and space.