The Official Writing Challenge
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Okay...you got me with the surprise ending. Early on I began wondering how the story would be resolved. Then the description of him standing up and the fear he might actually fall... but...you got me! Loved it.
02/03/06
Cool concept. Careful of punctuation placement. The ending totally caught me off guard, and resolved the piece nicely. Good job!