The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
Sweet story! But it would sound better if the name was "Special" instead of "misfit"...just a thought. Thanks for sharing and God Bless.
Lovely story, and nicely told too. I agree that a different word to misfit might have been better, but I think I see where you were coming from. Perhaps the child felt a little 'out of place' themselves? Maybe a little emotional background would flesh this out a little. Nice gentle pace to this. God bless.