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01/30/06
A beautiful story, a beautiful reunion, and a great ending! Thank you for sharing this story with us! God bless.
This is very well-written!! It has a great title, and grabs the reader's attention and holds it to the end. Congratulations!!
01/31/06
I didn't understand right away that the first two paragraphs reflected on a past event, but it made sense later. This is a gripping story with a happy ending.
02/01/06
Wow! This is really, really good. Just plain good everything! Grabbed us and carried us to the end. Great story!
02/03/06
Nicely done, good details.
02/06/06
I was a bit confused by Carrier and Cassie, but overall nicely done. A great ending to a sadness the mother must have always felt.
02/06/06
OOPs, thanks about the "carrie' cassie goof! I read it a zillion times and never caught it!!:)
02/07/06
Very touching indeed. Well done.
02/07/06
This story tore at my heart, from begginning to end. Well done! I loved it!
This is beautiful, Terri! You had me in tears at the end! Well-written and a well-deserved "highly commended"! Congrats!