The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
I love Bible stories retold! And you told this one very nicely! God bless.
01/30/06
PS: One suggestion; for those unfamiliar with the Bible, and it's wonderful stories - I would add the scripture text for their edification.
01/31/06
Very nicely done. Congratulations.
02/01/06
I liked the viewpoint of people keeping a space/distance from her...hadn't thought much about that...what a wonderful thing Jesus did for her! Well done!
I really enjoyed reading your depiction of the woman with the issue of blood. You did a good job wrapping this story around the challenge word - "space". I love this Bible story - A woman clinging to her last thread of hope, reaches out and touches the threads of Jesus, the only one who can heal her. Thanks for sharing!
02/01/06
I like the viewpoint you give and the retelling of this Biblical story. Good job!