The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
The subject being "space" - I assume the clutter is taking up space. Shorter paragraphs would make this piece more "reader friendly". Thanks for sharing.
01/31/06
I actually enjoyed the tad bit of humor in your story and definition. I do think you were speaking of clutter taking up space, and having built up mess in our lives. I liked the time for spring cleaning! Bout that time..fer sure! God bless ya, littlelight
I know alot about those pin marks on the back of the non-treated leather chair, and the pennies embedded in the computer's floppy slot. The idea is expressed through widely understood examples. This is good, but I felt that the flow was off. Expecially in the opening paragraph. God bless, Sein