The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/06
The tense shifts made the opening a little confusing, the outline also wandered a bit perhaps the abundance of non essential words. I think you have the start of something here. I hope to read more.
02/02/06
I am not great with tense shifts technology, but I felt the first few paragraphs were just a bit difficult for me to get on the run way. But then your story flew in the wind. Loved the story, and I enjoy reading true stories like these. God bless ya, littlelight
Intriguing article. Well written. Is this really true?
02/07/06
I'm wondering that too ... is it really true? The way you led into it with you both sitting on the highway was effective. Well done.
02/07/06
Yes, it's true - and only the pastor's wife believes me...since she saw one identical to mine. A very eerie sight indeed!