The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
A tragic, heartbreaking story! But solace can only be found by taking your troubles to GOd in prayer! One day we will have all our questions answered, but until then He is our only Hope for refuge, comfort and peace. Well written!
This has a strong message, written with love and honesty. Yes there are times when it is hard to see God's plan but the message comes through loud and clear. We have a friend in Jesus. God bless.
01/25/06
A good job creating the character of the mother; I feel as if I know her, and her spiritual struggles are very realistically portrayed. There are a few missing commas here and there, but they barely detract from the impact of this story. Wonderful ending, full of hope.
A touching story with a powerful message. Well done.