The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
I wish more Christians could "see" the ugliness of sin and it's power to separate us from the holiness of God...the way you have. A timely message. Kate~
A writer who pulls no punches is always a blessing - especially one who can create such vivid images. There may be those who would shift in their seats a little uncomfortably at this. ‘believe in God…but look at these pictures…don’t you love them?’ Well done! God bless.
01/25/06
Excellent. I got a little lost in the vision part because I wanted to hurry through it. But I didn't want to go back and read that part either. May I always see my sin as being that gross and awful, deadly. Good job!
01/25/06
Very vivid, and well-written. I'm still not clear where the grandfather comes in; I'll read this another time or two, though, it's worth the read. Masterful writing.