The Official Writing Challenge
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You are free right now, believe it.
Absolutely beautiful! You have opened your soul in this powerful poem. It is an eloquent, bittersweet, and compelling statement of the journey that leads from bondage to freedom through the love of Christ. Truly excellent!
Sweet, precious, healing ... may God bless this writing. And may He continue to keep you under His Wings. Truely beautiful!
A nice poem of a journey toward healing.
Well done. Without being graphic or melodramatic you exposed the emotions and fears behind destructive behaviors and showed the beginning of healing in 'One tear'. Yeggy

What hope is wrapped up in the concept of 'start' ... the beginning of healing and wholeness.

Your poetry flows very well and the content is sad but hopeful too. It is expressed beautifully.
Beautifully executed, Laurie! I love this line: "A freedom journey I may start." Freedom is available for those of us in Christ. It is a matter of the will - of "starting." Thanks for putting your heart on paper (well, on the computer screen....) :-)