The Official Writing Challenge
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01/27/06
Very nice story of one ministering to another. It had a nice flow to it. Good dialogue. I enjoyed it!
01/27/06
There was much to like here. The only thing that gave me pause was that the friend didn't really address any of her specific problems. Of course the Scriptures and prayers are invaluable, but she seemed to gloss over the actual problems.

This is well-written, with believable characters and dialog. I'd really like to read more with these characters.
01/27/06
A nice reminder that we all need from time to time -stop worrying and start praying!