The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful story, and a good warning in a subtle way. Sin almost always starts from innocent actions that get out of hand, and your story illustrates it perfectly.
Very well-written, and a good cautionary tale.
In an era where we tend to glorify romance over committment, it is refreshing to see someone stand up for the right. Nicely done.
Great writing! Taking every thought captive - that's needed every day. I'm glad the mc saw the truth of the matter. A good read!
A well told lesson about how easy it is to let things go too far.
A hard lesson to learn, but told in a gentle, non preachy style. Good work. Yeggy
You captured the situation very believably, showing how easy it is to cross invisible lines in relationships. I wish more people could realize where those lines are before they get in over their heads. Great job on a well written and creative entry.