The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
Powerful story, and a good warning in a subtle way. Sin almost always starts from innocent actions that get out of hand, and your story illustrates it perfectly.
01/24/06
Very well-written, and a good cautionary tale.
01/26/06
In an era where we tend to glorify romance over committment, it is refreshing to see someone stand up for the right. Nicely done.
01/26/06
Great writing! Taking every thought captive - that's needed every day. I'm glad the mc saw the truth of the matter. A good read!
01/26/06
A well told lesson about how easy it is to let things go too far.
01/27/06
A hard lesson to learn, but told in a gentle, non preachy style. Good work. Yeggy
You captured the situation very believably, showing how easy it is to cross invisible lines in relationships. I wish more people could realize where those lines are before they get in over their heads. Great job on a well written and creative entry.