The Official Writing Challenge
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I had a little trouble getting past the first 5 sentences, but at the point where the story really begins - with the hungry woman - your story is gripping; not "preachy" but surely motivating.
A gripping picture of hope in a fallen world. Great writing skills in a powerful story.
"I was hungry and you gave me food, I was naked and you clothed me, I was a stranger and you...": This story is a great example of "What you do unto the least of these, You have done it unto me"! Such a powerful lesson so brilliantly written. God Bless.
The craftsmanship of your words grabbed my attention. You had me from the beginning, but when you began describing the movement of the rags and I realized a child was involved, I was a gonner. Thank you for writing such a thought provoking, and yes, convicting story.