The Official Writing Challenge
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Nice dialogue!I think this would be good into a longer story too!:)
Oh, I liked this! I wanted more!
Creative approach to the topic. I liked it.
Brilliant writing, creative idea and fantastic answers to questions that are very Real to Real People in Real Life!
I was enthralled with this story. Great job!
Cute story! I really like the handymen remedy. And I'm glad that Miss Understanding wasn't afraid to reach out and offer truth. Nice!
Yes! Me too! It felt like more! (love the handyman solution! ;)) Love Invisible's solution too - it's a good thing your paper would print such advice! Perfect!
Great job! Tight, realistic and an interesting format.
What a clever idea and nicely done. I wanted more, too.
I agree this was too good to keep so short. Maybe you could have given us a couple more shallow problems to laugh about before the invisible one. Loved the sushi line, and I don't even like fish! I hope you post a longer version later for us to enjoy. :)
Absolutely delightful! So cute and yet so profound!
Be careful what you pray for, huh? Relaxing read. Love your sense of humour. Yeggy.
I love the title of 'Miss Understanding'! And her role. That was a clever concept.

I agree with the others ... more please! Well done.
Ditto to the above. Well done.