The Official Writing Challenge
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01/23/06
I'm sorry but I got a little lost in this. There are some well-writtten parts. Best wishes with this piece.
Writing from a prophetic unction isn't always easily understood, I got it. Thanks!
01/24/06
The concept of sanctuary is beautiful and peaceful. The writing here was sometimes difficult to follow, and the theme was nearly lost. Perhaps the same exhortation in a more conventional format? I really liked your paragraph about "nothing to perform..." Very thought-provoking.
01/28/06
I too got a little lost.