The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/18
I think you give an excellent description of this lane. Nice work!
10/28/18
Wow! This makes sense. Well-done. I love the piece, but think it would be even better if you omit the last paragraph. Just my thought.
10/29/18
Well done - I enjoyed this and recognise the lane as one well travelled! I do agree that the last paragraph could be scrapped.