The Official Writing Challenge
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01/24/06
I like the way you bracketed your poem with the same phrase "from the start." Try to avoid the construction "did (verb)" as it reads awkwardly. And I'm not clear what the #9 meant. This is a lovely psalm to God...thank you for writing this.
01/27/06
A poem from the heart. Thanks for sharing.